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Yay!
My first HDR!
I know,it isn't the best one but it is my first try!
Some holes in the sky...
Anyway,I know it's the first one,and that's why I really want to recieve some feedback,to be able to make better HDRs in the future!
Informations:
Made with my old camera,Canon Powershot A460.
Photographer and editor:Myself,Sergiu ©.
Location:Le mont-Saint-Michele,a unique place on earth,very beautiful.
It would take me a book to describe how much and why I love that place!
Little storry:
In 38' my granmother's mother
went there to,and after 71 one years,I made myself a photo in the exact place where she did this before!Amazing!
Went there with my parents.
Anyway,as I was saying,please,if you enjoyed it
it,and if you don't like it don't be afraid to tell me the reason in a comment,or if you are a Premium Member in a critique!
Stop!You aren't allowed to:Use,edit,claim it as your own,re-submit it or anything like that!
Thanks for reading this,have a nice day,sell your house and go there!
My first HDR!
I know,it isn't the best one but it is my first try!
Some holes in the sky...
Anyway,I know it's the first one,and that's why I really want to recieve some feedback,to be able to make better HDRs in the future!
Informations:
Made with my old camera,Canon Powershot A460.
Photographer and editor:Myself,Sergiu ©.
Location:Le mont-Saint-Michele,a unique place on earth,very beautiful.
It would take me a book to describe how much and why I love that place!
Little storry:
In 38' my granmother's mother
went there to,and after 71 one years,I made myself a photo in the exact place where she did this before!Amazing!Went there with my parents.
Anyway,as I was saying,please,if you enjoyed it
it,and if you don't like it don't be afraid to tell me the reason in a comment,or if you are a Premium Member in a critique!Stop!You aren't allowed to:Use,edit,claim it as your own,re-submit it or anything like that! Thanks for reading this,have a nice day,sell your house and go there!
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Vision Originality Technique ImpactSince you added this to #Xpose-it I will now provide you with a critique <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Big Grin)"/>I love the story behind this image. I pretty much always read the artists comments and I do think they really add something to the piece of art submitted.
HDR-photograpy is something I should still try. What software did you use? Photoshop, I suppose?
in terms of HDR, this image is great; it does indeed contain a high dynamic range xD the sky has a great contrast, the clouds look as if they will float right from the screen into my room. And I don't even have a good monitor.. and the contrastful objects don't have that annoying 'aura' around them, as is seen in many HDR photo's.. or just in the ones I've seen, I don't know xD
the rest of the scene looks beautiful too, I would love to go to Saint Michele someday! It looks a bit like the island Texel in the Netherlands <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/> I've got two points of critique.
First of all, the resolution. I would love to see photo's like this in high definition! there's a slight noise over the picture, and while it's not really disturbing, I'd rather see it without <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Wink)"/>secondly, the person on the right looks like he's in the image accidentaly. I know you can't change this now but either put him/her more in the picture, using the rule of thirds (I take it you're familiar with this rule), so putting him 1/3rd of the right and lower corner of the photograph. Or leave him out completely.
the last thing: you used comic sans for your signature *cries*
either use your own handwriting or a better font <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Lick)"/> If you're working in photoshop, try lowering the opacity of your signature-layer, and make it black or white according to the photo you're putting it on. I think it'd look more 'professional' that way. (myself, I don't use signatures at all. my works aren't worth stealing anyway xD)
anyway, I hope I helped you a bit with this critique!
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